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Hood BY stephen r. lawhead |
Picture here ©Inchoatus Group March 29, 2007
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A critical review of... Title: Hood, Book I of the King Raven Trilogy Author: Stephen R. Lawhead Publisher: WestBow Press / Thomas Nelson Publishers Length: 472 pages in hardcover Cover Art: (The Brand Hatchery) This is a very nicely executed cover with the brooding colors and gloomy forest. The arrow punching through the cover from front to back is a nice touch. Usually we're not a huge fan of GIANT LETTERING but here at least the colors work well. As always, we appreciate it when we can purchase the book without feeling like a loser and this cover allows us to do that.
Rating It's a book that is on the cusp of being good but just doesn't quite get over the hump... as it is, we can recommend this book only for the most hardcore of Lawhead fans and perhaps as a diversion for Welsh Literature students. Stephen Lawhead Fans BUY (4/7) Historical Fantasy Enthusiast BUY (4/7) Speculative Fiction Audience PASS (3/7) General Literature Readership PASS (2/7)
Other Novels Exploring this Theme Last of the Amazons by Steven Pressfield (one of the finest examples of historical fantasy where the historical scholar takes on the legends of the Amazons) Taliesin by Stephen R. Lawhead (he himself set one of the highest of standards in historical fantasy with his take on the beginning of the Arthurian legend and the fall of Atlantis) Tigana by Guy Gavriel Kay (while not "historical" the tale told here is a classic one following the archetype of Hood: a prince attempting to free his people from an invading force) Magician: Apprentice by Raymond E. Feist (there are any number of books that lapse completely into invented fantasy of a people attempting to thwart foreign invaders... we offer this as an example of these)
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"Another problem (now significantly so unwelcome as to be all but forgotten) is that while the earliest literary versions we have may be weak on narrative, they are remarkably clear about their social positioning. The figure of the man in the greenwood, Robin Hood, or Robin 'Ood, or (T.H. White's idea) Robin Wood, may go back centuries into the time of myth, but Robin as we have him in the Robin Hood ballads of the late Middle Ages is a representative of the yeomanry. His weapons are the cheap ones of the rural peasantry, bow and quarterstaff. Sometimes he has a sword, but he never wears armor and does not ride to battle. His social prejudices are those of the rural peasantry as well—and this is where the embarrassment starts for the modern rewriter. Medieval Robin has nothing against the aristocracy at all, indeed he likes them, and is ready to assist them, as long as they are real aristocrats (i.e., men who have inherited their rank from old time), and as long as they are prepared to be "good fellows." His enemies and victims are tax-collectors, officers of the central government, the upper ranks of the clergy, especially abbots of well-endowed monasteries, and in particular lawyers: the literate classes, in other words. Modern writers, perhaps uneasily aware that they themselves would get very short shrift from a modern Robin, find this hard to sympathize with, while Marxist and sub-Marxist academics feel that Robin is much too like the surly, independent, white male Republican or Conservative citizens who voted in Presidents Bush, Bush, and Reagan, and Mrs. Thatcher too." --Thomas Shippey, Christinatoday.com It's always a great pleasure to read the pros at work. The World Wide Web is filled well pas the saturation point with people venturing to opine on books. Most of them summarize the plot, announce "I liked it" or equally "this sucks" and go on with their day regarding themselves as reviewers. Good reviews teach us something about the book; they illuminate something about it we may not have otherwise thought or known. Shippey is a scholar of this kind of work (and noted author J.R.R. Tolkien: Author of the Century and merely having the brass set necessary to publish a book with that title in the academic community means he reigns tall in our system of respect). He is able to provide us some historical background and pick quarrels with Lawhead's accuracy that we might not otherwise be able to appreciate. In this section, he is able to provide us some background on the behavior of what an historical Robin Hood might more realistically represent and re-frame the entire setting for us in ways that allow us to better critically assess it ourselves. Nice work. Perhaps
most intriguing about this tale is the way in which both sides believe
themselves firmly in the right... with God on their side. The Normans
believe that King William has been chosen by God for the throne, and
therefore what he decrees must be God's will. The Britons believe their
land was given to them by God, and it is their God-given right to defend
it. Both receive encouragement from their own priests and other religious
leaders. --Christian Fiction Review (Best of 2006) Here we have an example of the Fan Review. Brought to you by the same people who don't "believe" in evolution and think God will save us from global warming and will certainly punish the wicked in the next lifetime (because they're surely not being punished now), we get this little piece of fandom. This quote is from their write-up of the 100 bet books of 2006 from their Christian perspective. The funniest thing about this is the first paragraph where they mention one of the interesting things about the story is the religious tension embodied by the characters. They're right... but being the authority on Christian books you'd think they'd bother to mention how to untangle the rather thorny knot of whose side God was on, anyway! But no... just hey, this was kind of intriguing. So, we suppose, were the evils inflicted upon Job by God over a wager with Satan. The true reason we wanted to point this out, though, was how harmful this actually is to writers like Lawhead. He is working with some themes of fantasy and has agreed to work with a Christian publisher. A certain warm reception from the Christian community is to be expected. But to laud it to this degree--with warmth and delight--and announce it as one of the 100 best books of the year. Well, it's not! Lawhead's a great writer but this simply isn't his best work. To heap false praise on a book like this is to cheapen the work of many, many others and pull the whole sub-genre of Christian fantasy into disrepute. What We Say Lawhead has established something of a following for writing fantasy based in Christian themes. If there was an analogue to Christian Rock music to speculative fiction, then Lawhead would be it. But this unfairly limits his audience, which can and should be much broader. Lawhead is an author we’ve praised for fearlessness in his writing. He attacks the fantasy areas that interest him and he unabashedly writes of heroism. To borrow Northrop Frye, he’s in the high mimetic mode (and perhaps a true "romance" in the Frye sense to the extent that we eventually see divine influence and Welsh magic permeating the setting). Moreover, while he's well known for his excellent Pendragon Cycle, it is his historical fiction novel Byzantium chronicling the life of Saint Aidan that is truly one of the finest and most accomplished novels we've ever read in the genre. So here we have Lawhead--despite his publisher (a noted publisher of Christian books)--coming to us with a pedigree and background that we greatly enjoy. Why not Robin Hood? This book isn't exactly the king of disappointments but "we're not a 100% in love with it" either (thank you GEICO caveman). After Taliesin, after Byzantium, even after the bit weaker The Iron Lance, we expected a bit more than we got. A man goes to the refrigerator and grabs the milk carton--he drinks right out of it because his wife's not around to see it--and he takes a big slug of icy coolness. Except, it turns out it's just a tiny bit spoiled and it's only after that confusing moment of expectation and reality that you realize what happened. Hood's kind of like that. The prologue of the book is actually one of the best moments. It is a scene of the young Bran ap Brychan coming home from a personal triumph only to meet with personal tragedy. It resonates with a moment in Arthur when Arthur leads his cymbrogi up a mountain and nearly carries Cai on his back to get there. And there are other moments. Lawhead is a master at these sorts of events: of mixing half myth with youthful vigor. In a way, it is the essence of the genre where the passions run hot and high in youth and the world wrenches back and forth in idealistic black and white. In a way, just like Christianity itself. It sets up an important thing because the Robin Hood of this adventurous retelling in the Welsh forests--this Bran ap Brychan--is going to prove to have several unsavory aspects. In fact, of the deadly sins he has lust, wrath, pride, and perhaps sloth all completely handled--high marks all around. Presumably, he will reveal some virtues later on... which is set up in important ways by this youthful prologue where we get to see the seeds of diligence and kindness (of the virtues, it's hard to imagine this particular guy exhibiting chastity, temperance, forgiveness, or humility but perhaps these traits will be manifested in the merry men and that will count with God and the reader). The second chapter--our first meeting with the protagonist--shows a grown up Bran attempting to seduce Maid Mérian in her bedroom. He's not seducing her in a good way either like Romeo was seducing Juliet... he's trying to add her to conquests like Don Juan himself. Not quite as idealistic as the prologue needless to say. In fact, these first two chapters is where one can most clearly see how far off course Lawhead is careering. In the first chapter, we have the obligatory slaughter of innocents when outnumbered and betrayed by a larger force. Then we have the equally obligatory chapters of Bran--the scion and aggrieved party of the loss--coming to realization and then taking flight. It is here that we feel the most disappointed. Welsh mythology aside, all we have here is a very standard opening to any number of fantasy novels. The fact that this is Robin Hood retold does not help... it's tired and it puts us to sleep as well. The story improves a bit as the embryo of the merry men begin to be revealed. Both Little John and Friar Tuck become reified in Iwan--the champion of Elfael--and as the monk Brother Ffreol. Ffreol is a nice invention who invites comparisons to some of the more memorable Lawhead characters such as Bedwyr of Arthur and several extraordinary vikings in Byzantium. Yet these meetings run afoul of the plot, which drags the reader through a ponderous and seemingly purposeless episode in Lundein (London?) where they attempt to ransom their cantref. This ends up being motivation for money that is so pervasive in the legend of Robin Hood but the payoff comes to late and pays too little. We're forced to crawl over a ton of text--not exactly crawl through broken glass but crawl nonetheless--to reach this point and we find we would have rather stipulated all this right at the outset and run instead. Things do not improve as we follow Bran into exile and into the Mr. Miagi equivalent of this book. Bran is rescued by a wise woman of the forest who manifests druid-like powers, heals Bran, and instills a wonted level of loyalty and zeal to match his pride and self-centeredness. Once again, we are forced through a lot of text to get to a point where we know that every fantasy book of this type must reach: the pupil reaching an understanding with the master. We can almost see Bran on the pier piling practicing his crane kick getting ready for the karate tournament at the end of the section. Three strikes now and the book only half over. But the latter half of the book is more interesting. Should any readers make it this far, they will find that Bran aptly fills the role of Robin Hood in ways that we can find fulfilling. The legend itself begins to take root in this part where we see them plying longbows, camping in the woods, stealing from the Normans (Ffreincs), and otherwise doing Robin Hoodish things. Can this overcome the poor beginnings? Perhaps. And perhaps it augurs well for later installments of this trilogy. For now, this book with a weak beginning and a strong second-half becomes unwieldy, unbalanced, and unfulfilling. One interesting point is this notion of the deadly sin of wrath that Bran exhibits at times. He literally becomes confused and blinded by rage. The Robin Hood of contemporary myth is a rake and a rogue. He is the James Bond with the quip and the Hannibal Smith of the A-Team with his regard for personal profit. There is no Wrath in these characters just as there is seldom Wrath in Robin Hood. But what causes Robin Hood to be Robin Hood? A man who is willing to "rage against the machine" even if it just taxes and he does it with a wink of the eye as he does in these legends certainly bespeaks a kind of fury that is buried deep beneath the surface and never dies. While our Bran in this book is certainly justified in being angry over the loss of his birthright--a tired plot device--how that wrath infects and reinterprets the legend is a fine achievement. Another interesting effect is how Christianity is used. As some of the critics mentioned above, each "side" uses it to justify their actions. But it's more than that. Particularly courageous for this author who publishes on Christian themes and using a Christian publisher, he shows how religion--at least organized religion--becomes merely another political tool to be used for oppression, for gain, and for dim justification for raiding, for taking, and for the general acquisition of more power. Just like the conquistadors of Spain ravaging the new world for Glory, God, and Gold so we see the Normans invading for very similar reasons under the guise of God. Opposing this corruption of the Holy Church is only the heathenish magic of the Welsh (though doubtless will ultimately be revealed as the same source). Can Christians cheer for the pagans? Place in the Genre It's a shame the book turned out like it did because one can find the book in the bookstores. In the brick-and-mortar attachments to coffee shops across the nation, you can find Hood in hardcover and usually in the featured sections. We finally had a good writer featured with the stores carrying the hardback! Let the bells ring! It would have been great for the respectability of the genre if this book had worked out a little better. In some ways, while the Christian publisher limits the readership it also expands it in certain ways; there's an audience that might not have otherwise picked up this book except that they subscribe or log onto some Christian source or another and see the author featured. It had a chance to reach beyond itself. As it stands, it's hard to to believe that Hood will reach anyone in any meaningful way outside of a narrow audience that really craves adolescent literature. There's another facet: Lawhead had a chance to make the definitive story about the Robin Hood Legend. Malory has been the source for the Aurthurian legend for centuries--what can be done with that legend is merely to reinterpret the old. Lawhead had done something with the Pendgragon Cycle--he had reinvented it in the Welsh mythology and exposed an audience to new ideas. This same format just isn't going to work with the Robin Hood legend because there's no definitive source to react against and reinvent. Yes, there are customs: the sheriff, the arrows, etc... but there's no definitive source. Lawhead doesn't have the luxury of being to make shorthand references to the Robin Hood legend like he did the Arthurian and make it work. The general readership just isn't as ready to reinvent something they didn't understand to begin with. It requires a great deal more exposition. Taliesin would have been a far weaker work if written in a vacuum... that borrowed power from a great work is simply missing from Hood. As it stands, if the Robin Hood legend is to be made real for the modern era it is going to come from another author. This one was born stunted. Who Should Read We gave meager buy recommendations for the Lawhead fan and the historical fantasy enthusiast. The former will forgive him his lapses into the more tired and customary aspects of plot fulfillment while the latter will be entranced enough in connecting the Welsh with the "conventional" Robin Hood legends that both can be propelled to the end of the novel. They will have some sort of lingering desire to read the next book and will keep it in their library. It is not yet clear if we could recommend this for the Christian fantasy enthusiast (a difficult market segment to reconcile, surely). Who Should Pass We just don't think there is any significant number of people anywhere who are going to do backflips over this book. High on this list are people who are looking for something unusual and new in fantasy books--people who tend to gravitate towards Miéville, VanderMeer, or Wolfe (like us) or similarly people who don't necessarily mind the formulaic but want it gritty and new in the telling with some starkly real violence like George RR Martin or Stephen R Donaldson. For historical fantasy, you should start and stop with Stephen Pressfield. At the least, you should begin your readings with Lawhead with Byzantium or Taliesin, which are extraordinary books and well worth your time. |